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Mario and Luigi by Virmont89 Mario and Luigi by Virmont89
I cut out just the two of them becuz i like how they turned out, that and it kind of looks like they're a sticker with a glittery background.

Mario and Luigi (c) Nintendo
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It's a very emotional piece. I don't know what you originally intended, but to me it suggests what the brothers feel after an unsuccessful game. Disappointment, shame, sorrow, and a yearning to try again, though an uncertainty whether they could be successful again.

The colors perhaps are a bit strong, especially in the brothers' faces, which look very red almost to the point of sunburn. Mario's left leg seems a bit off in its intersection with the right; perhaps hiding the foot a little more behind the right leg would give a better sense that he's sitting with one leg crossed.
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Okay just so you know; I wrote a huge long critique then dA exited out of this page and now I have to start again!
I really like this piece, I think it really looks great, and you've put a lot of thought into it! This really struck out as I was looking at some art of yours, and it was definitely worth clicking on! I really like the silver bits of the edges, I've always liked the shiny backing on stickers!
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Vision: I gave you a 4½/5 for vision, because I think you had a really good vision of what you wanted this to look like, and I actually have a vision of what you wanted it to look like, and it takes work to get both minds working on the same piece of art!
Originality: I gave you a 4½/5 for this section because I really like how you've taken two original characters and put emotion and thought into recreating a different version, in your own style!
Technique: I really quite like the shading, as it plays a huge part in the main picture, and how people see it!
Impact: 5/5 for impact, because this is a really great piece and I really do love the work and effort you've put into it!
Overall score: 17/20
Here is some useful feedback for next time:
-Are the faces meant to be as red as they are? Maybe toning down the colour shade a bit might help make them look a bit more realistic.
-Some of the feet and leg poses are't quite right in dynamics, you could maybe just look at that for a next time?
-Maybe a little lighter on the heavy colour, and some more shading, or was it meant to be dark and heavy? It would be interesting to see the difference!
Overall Comment: I really like this work, and many others of yours, so well done!
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SMDKFan Featured By Owner May 29, 2012
They need a hug.
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SMDKFan Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012
Don't be sad boys^^ They need a hug.

I can think of over atleast 5 things without a mix in it.
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Virmont89 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
there are many things i can say to this that would make good fan fics but i'm only doing "fan" stuff now when people give points for me to draw or write it.
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SMDKFan Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012
ok.

Do you know how to exchange llama badges for da points....cause i don't know how to get da points^^;
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Virmont89 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
you can give points for llama badges but you can't give llama badges for points ^^; that would be an unfair trad since llama badges are free and points are not.
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SMDKFan Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012
aw man.....i don't even want half the things...What do i do gor da points.
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Virmont89 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
draw for people (like i do) or buy them yourself, it's $25 for 800 :points:
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SMDKFan Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012
Aw man...and I lack da points...and i can't use money...idk how to submit money over inter net.
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Virmont89 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
you have to inter your Visa or MasterCard information by clicking the "shop" key at the top
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